Year 11 Chinese and Literature · Question 1 听力实战

Q1 听力实战
职场中的性别平等

Listening and Responding · Question 1 · 10 marks(1 + 3 + 6)

按 HSC Question 1 的规矩走:录音放两遍,中间停两分钟做笔记,第二遍放完后有十二分钟作答。答案一律用英文写,中文作答不给分。这一段对话讲的是公司要提拔更多女性进管理层,一位经理怎样说服一个心里有疑虑的同事,正好接着课上讲的“男女平等实现了吗”。
动手之前先看:Q1 三小题各要什么

三小题,三种写法

(a) 1 分 · 找事实一句话答出问的那个事实,答案就在对话开头一两轮里。不分析、不展开。
(b) 3 分 · 说观点一段约 80 到 120 个英文词,把某一位说话人的看法讲全,综合三到四个要点。只答内容,别碰技巧。
(c) 6 分 · 内容加语言连贯的英文段落,写三到四个完整的技巧环,同时把内容点覆盖到。不要用 ① ② ③ 分条。

(c) 的一个技巧环 = 三件事

① 点名技巧 rhetorical question / statistics / contrast / example / parallelism / simile / high modality / definition / famous saying
② 引出原文 把对话里那句话译成英文引出来,加引号
③ 说清效果 这个技巧在这里劝住了什么、让听众感觉到什么,扣回说话人的目的

只写 “she uses contrast” 而不引原话、不讲效果,是最常见也最致命的失分。三个技巧环写透,比罗列九个技巧名分数高。

写效果时换着用的动词

highlight underscore convince urge evoke frame personalise reinforce challenge dismantle lend credibility heighten the sense of urgency。一路 “shows / demonstrates” 重复到底,分数上不去。

三条红线

(b) 跑去谈语言技巧等于答错题。(c) 用中文或复述剧情不给分。三个劝说角度只分析一个,卡在低分段。

录音 The Text

第一遍只听不写,抓大意;停两分钟记要点;第二遍再一句句抠细节。练习时也控制在两遍,考试不会给第三遍。

题目 Questions

答题框的大小是对答案长短的提示。全部用英文作答。

(a)1 分
根据对话,公司最近推出了什么政策?
根據對話,公司最近推出了什麼政策?
According to the text, what policy has the company recently introduced?
(b)3 分
周经理认为职场性别平等能给公司带来哪些好处?
周經理認為職場性別平等能給公司帶來哪些好處?
What benefits does Manager Zhou believe workplace gender equality can bring to the company?
(c)6 分
周经理在对话中是如何劝说小陈支持这项政策的?联系对话内容和语言特色来回答问题。
周經理在對話中是如何勸說小陳支持這項政策的?聯繫對話內容和語言特色來回答問題。
How does Manager Zhou persuade Xiao Chen to support this policy? In your answer, refer to both the content and the language features used in the conversation.
交之前自查三件事
① (b) 是不是只写了“赚钱”那一面?她讲的好处分两层,业绩利润是一层,视角、沟通、决策、用好人才是另一层,缺一层就丢分。
② (c) 每一处技巧都做到“名称 → 原文 → 效果”三步了吗?至少三处写透。
③ 全部用英文写了吗?这一题中文作答不给分。

答完再看 Check Yourself

先把三题写完、交上去,再展开下面三块对照。没写完就看,等于白做一次。

① 听力文字稿(黄色是可以用的技巧)

周经理,公司这次要提拔更多女性进入管理层,还定了明确的比例。说实话,我心里有点疑虑。管理工作压力大、应酬多,女同事真的顶得住吗?

小陈,你这个想法,恰恰是我今天想跟你聊的。以前大家总觉得,男人主外、女人主内,管理就该是男人的事。可是现在时代早就变了难道女性就天生不适合当领导吗?所谓职场性别平等,并不是要偏袒谁,而是让男女在同样的能力面前,得到同样的机会

话是这么说,可我还是担心能力和经验的问题。

那我们就用事实说话。去年一项针对五百家企业的研究显示,管理层里女性比例超过三成的公司,利润平均高出百分之十五。放眼世界,那些鼓励女性参与决策的国家和企业,创新力和竞争力往往更强。你看隔壁部门的李总,她带的团队连续三年业绩第一。这些数字和例子,难道还不够说明问题吗?

这么一说,好像确实有道理。

不只是业绩。女性管理者往往能带来不一样的视角、更细腻的沟通、更周全的决策。一个团队就像一只鸟,只有两只翅膀都强壮,才能飞得又高又远。古人说得好,巾帼不让须眉;毛主席也讲过,妇女能顶半边天我们企业要发展,就必须让女性有舞台,让男性有伙伴,让团队有活力

您说得太好了。看来是我以前的观念太老旧了,总以为这是给女性的照顾,没想到其实是对整个团队的成全。

能这样想,我真高兴。平等不是口号,而是让每个人都能各尽其才。你想想,当一半的人才被埋没,企业损失的是多大的力量?我相信,只要我们迈出这一步,公司一定会更有竞争力。

好,这次会议我一定投支持票,也会带动其他同事一起转变观念。

② 技巧对照表:这一段一共九个技巧可以写

最后两行落在同一句话上:“我们企业要发展,就必须让女性有舞台……”既是高情态,也是排比。技巧可以重叠,写的时候分开写成两环就行。

技巧原文效果怎么写(英文)
对比
Contrast
以前大家总觉得,男人主外、女人主内,管理就该是男人的事。可是现在时代早就变了Juxtaposes the outdated 'men outside, women at home' attitude against the changed present, exposing Xiao Chen's assumption as obsolete and opening him to a new view.
反问
Rhetorical question
难道女性就天生不适合当领导吗?Challenges the assumption that women are innately unsuited to leadership, forcing Xiao Chen to confront his own bias rather than passively receiving a claim.
下定义
Definition
所谓职场性别平等,并不是要偏袒谁,而是让男女在同样的能力面前,得到同样的机会Precisely defines what workplace gender equality means, dismantling his misconception that the policy is favouritism or special treatment.
数据
Statistics
管理层里女性比例超过三成的公司,利润平均高出百分之十五Uses concrete figures to prove a tangible commercial benefit, making the argument objective and difficult to dispute.
举例
Example
你看隔壁部门的李总,她带的团队连续三年业绩第一Cites a familiar, real workplace case that makes the abstract claim credible and relatable to Xiao Chen.
明喻
Simile / analogy
一个团队就像一只鸟,只有两只翅膀都强壮,才能飞得又高又远Vividly likens a team to a bird needing both wings, making the necessity of gender balance intuitive and memorable.
成语与名言
Idiom and famous saying
巾帼不让须眉;毛主席也讲过,妇女能顶半边天Invokes the idiomatic saying 巾帼不让须眉 and a well-known authoritative quotation to lend cultural weight and emotional resonance to the claim of women's equal worth.
排比
Parallelism
让女性有舞台,让男性有伙伴,让团队有活力The rhythmic repeated 让… structure drives home that gender equality benefits every party, building persuasive momentum.
高情态
High modality
我们企业要发展,就必须让女性有舞台Strong modals such as 必须 and 一定 convey certainty and urgency, pressing Xiao Chen toward action rather than mere agreement.
③ 参考答案,以及怎样才算写到位

(a) 1 分

Sample The company has introduced a policy to promote more women into management positions and has set a clear target for the proportion of women in its leadership.

这题只要一个内容点:公司出台政策推动更多女性进入管理层,并且为女性在管理层的比例定了明确目标。答准这一点即可,含糊、答错或答非所问都拿不到分。

(b) 3 分

Sample Manager Zhou believes gender equality strengthens the company in several ways. Commercially, firms with over thirty per cent women in management earn on average fifteen per cent higher profits, and countries and companies that encourage women in decision-making tend to be more innovative and competitive. Beyond results, women managers bring a different perspective, more attentive communication and more thorough decision-making. She also argues that equality lets every person use their talents fully, prevents half the workforce's ability from being wasted, and gives the whole team greater vitality and long-term competitiveness.

这是一道归纳题。把周经理认为性别平等带来的好处尽量找全,再用自己的话综合成几点:提高业绩与利润、增强创新与竞争力、带来更多元的视角、沟通更细致、决策更周全、更充分地用好人才、让团队更有活力。要点越全、概括越到位分越高;只答一两点或照抄原文会丢分。

(c) 6 分

Sample Manager Zhou draws on a range of content and language features to move Xiao Chen from doubt to support. Firstly, she uses contrast, setting the old belief that 'men manage the outside world and women the home' against the fact that 'times have long changed.' This exposes his view as outdated and opens him to a new perspective. She reinforces this with a rhetorical question, asking whether 'women are naturally unsuited to being leaders,' which forces him to confront his own bias rather than simply hearing a claim. She also defines the policy clearly, explaining that equality is 'not about favouring anyone, but about giving men and women equal opportunity in the face of equal ability,' removing his fear that it is mere special treatment. Secondly, she persuades through evidence. She cites the statistic that companies with over thirty per cent women in management earn 'fifteen per cent higher profits,' and gives the concrete example of 'Director Li next door, whose team has topped performance for three years.' Combining data with a familiar case makes her argument objective and credible, and she seals it with another rhetorical question: 'aren't these figures and examples enough?' Finally, she appeals to culture and vision. She uses the simile that 'a team is like a bird that can only fly high and far when both wings are strong,' making the need for balance intuitive, and adds the idiom 'women are no less capable than men' and the saying 'women hold up half the sky' to lend cultural authority. She then employs parallelism and high-modality language, insisting the company 'must give women a stage, men a partner and the team vitality.' Together these techniques convince Xiao Chen that equality benefits everyone, prompting him to pledge his support.

内容和语言两条线都要踩到。内容上覆盖:什么是职场性别平等、旧观念与新观念的对比、支撑好处的数据和事例、以及对公司和团队的影响。语言上每个技巧都写成完整一环:点出技巧名称、引用原文例子、再解释它在这里起了什么作用。只报技巧名字却不举例、不讲作用,是最常见的丢分红线;大致答出三个完整技巧环并覆盖足够内容才能拿满分。

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