Year 11 Chinese and Literature · 议题 1.1

Q1 英文表达库

技巧名 · 动词 · 连词 · 句架

Q1 全程用英文作答。判断该贴哪个技巧是一回事,写出来又是另一回事:名字拼错、冠词错、动词搭错、一段话连不起来,都会让本来看懂了的东西拿不到分。这一页管的就是产出。
技巧名一定要拼对。技巧判断对了、英文拼错或搭配错,一样拿不到分。

一、技巧名 照这个拼

中文英文怎么放进句子
反问rhetorical questionHe poses a rhetorical question, 'Don't people see the importance of language learning?'
数据statistics
恒用复数,不说 a statistic
She uses statistics, such as 'over 40% divorce rate in China' to prove that…
调查报告a survey reportShe also uses the result of a survey report, citing that…, to support her view.
暗喻metaphorShe uses the metaphor 'a meal ticket' to express her refusal to…
明喻simileHe uses simile, 'A language is like a key to open the gate to the world' to express his stance.
类比analogyFinally, he uses an analogy, 'Like sailing against the current, if you don't advance, you will retreat', to help illustrate…
排比parallelism
不可数,别加 a
He employs parallelism, 'It is about cultural understanding', 'It is about embracing differences', 'It is about better communication'…
列举listingHe uses listing to show the many benefits of lifelong learning.
He highlights the benefits of language learning through listing, '…'.
对比contrasting X with Y
comparisons
…uses statistics to convey his disapproval, contrasting 50% of high school leavers in the 1980s… with the current figure of 10%.
名言a famous saying
a famous quote
the famous quotation
三种说法都算对
He uses the famous quotation 'Learning as long as you live'…
成语idiom…and the idiom 'Learning never stops' to validate his claim that…
举例an example of
relatable examples
She firstly uses an example of their parents who have been working hard for a better life…
亲身经历his own experienceThe use of his own experience… allows him to relate to the audience.
高情态high modality常被当成无关技巧乱贴。见下一节。
流行语colloquialism拿它当主要技巧写风险高。

轶事 anecdote 要用就务必拼对。

二、常见的贴错标签

同一类毛病:标签贴得不准,或者为了凑数硬贴。

说错名字

  • 名言不是成语:a famous saying 不是 idiom。“教育不是注满一桶水,而是点燃一把火”就是 a famous saying。
  • 类比不是明喻,也不是隐喻:analogy 不是 simile 或 metaphor。
  • 技巧名要拼对:idiom、anecdote、high modality、quotation 最容易拼错。

硬贴无关技巧

  • 文本里没有就别写:listing、comparison、simile、repetition、symbol 都常被凑数硬贴。
  • high modality 最常被乱贴,simile 和 idiom 也常贴错。
同一个标签在这一年是采分点、换一年就成了无关技巧,差别只在文本里到底有没有。宁可少写一个技巧、把两个写透,也别凑数硬贴。高情态尤其要克制。

三、动词 按 TEE 的落点分组

动词错位比选错词更常见。下面按它在 TEE 里的位置分四组,右栏是例句。

① 引出技巧(T 用)

动词 · 搭配中文例句
uses + 技巧使用He uses the famous quotation '…' and the idiom '…'
employs + 技巧运用He employs parallelism, '…', '…', '…'
applies + 技巧施用Xiaoqi applies a range of language features to persuade Yunfeng…
poses + a rhetorical question抛出(反问专用)He poses a rhetorical question, '…' to emphasise his view.
citing + 内容援引…uses the result of a survey report, citing that in many western countries…

② 说明用意(第一个 E)

动词 · 搭配中文例句
to express + 观点/立场表达…to express her views on marriage / to express his stance in favour of…
to show + 态度显出…to show her optimism and determination
to emphasise + 名词强调…to emphasise her financial independence / to emphasise his view
to stress + 名词着重指出…to stress the high expectation from Yunfeng's parents
to highlight + 名词
highlights … through 技巧
凸显…to highlight the burden on single children
He highlights the benefits of language learning through listing.
to convey + 名词传达He uses statistics to convey his disapproval.
to help illustrate + 名词帮着说明…to help illustrate the need for lifelong learning
to explain + what 从句解释…to explain what downgraded consumption looks like in society

③ 加强论证(第二个 E,近年最爱)

动词 · 搭配中文例句
to validate + his claim that…
to validate + his predictions
坐实…to validate his claim that people should participate in lifelong learning
近年最该学会的一个
to prove that + 从句证明…to prove that her decision to be single… is the right thing to do
to support + her view / his argument支撑…to support her view / to support his argument
to demonstrate + the fact that…摆出事实…to demonstrate the fact that it is important to fight for a better life

④ 落到听者身上(回扣目标)

动词 · 搭配中文例句
to convince sb that…
in order to convince sb not to…
使人信服…and convince them that lifelong learning is necessary
…in order to convince him not to lie flat
to persuade sb to + 动词说服去做…to persuade Yunfeng to take the postgraduate entrance exam
in order to prompt sb to + 动词促使…in order to prompt Yunfeng to rethink
to help sb + 动词原形帮助某人去…to help Xiaoyu's mother reflect on her beliefs
allows him to relate to + 听众拉近距离The use of his own experience… allows him to relate to the audience

四、连词 把技巧串成一段

技巧名和动词管的是一句话,连词管的是把三四句连成一段。Q1(c) 只有一段,读起来是散是整,全看这几个词。右栏是例句。

① 排序 一个技巧接一个技巧

连词 · 位置中文例句
Firstly, …
Secondly, …
Lastly, …
第一、第二、最后Firstly, Chinese culture used to value sons over daughters…
Secondly, four generations under one roof… were seen as a sign of blessing.
Lastly, it was believed that…
She firstly uses …她首先用She firstly uses an example of their parents who have been working hard for a better life…
by firstly + 动词ing先从…入手…by firstly addressing the 'double reduction' policy as an initiative to help students enjoy their childhood more.
He begins by + 动词ing他先是He begins by defining it simply as a trend where people under economic pressure abandon high-priced goods…
He then uses …接着He then uses relatable examples, as well as comparisons like '…'
Finally, he uses …最后Finally, he uses an analogy, 'Like sailing against the current, if you don't advance, you will retreat', to help illustrate…
两种位置都可以:句首的 Firstly, …,和主语后的 She firstly uses…。选一种用到底,别一段里两种混着来。

② 再加一条 技巧叠技巧

连词 · 位置中文例句
also
最保险的一个
也He also uses statistics like 'recruitment demand… dropped by 1.5%' to validate his predictions…
Besides, …此外Besides, he uses statistics '180 million single children have elderly parents and young children to support'…
Additionally, …另外Additionally, he uses the metaphor 'an inverted triangle' to highlight the burden on single children…
In addition, …另外In addition, learning a foreign language is unnecessary in Australia as everyone speaks English…
Moreover, …而且Moreover, she uses the analogy 'you lying flat is like a snail retracting into its shell to avoid problems' to further stress her point.
as well as + 名词以及He then uses relatable examples, as well as comparisons like '…'
further + 动词
to further + 动词
进一步Xiaoqi further persuades him through statistics '…'
…to further stress her point
写不下去的时候就回到 also。它的常见位置是主语后、动词前:He also uses…;也有放句首的 Also…,两种都算对。

③ 引出例子 把听到的原话搬进来

连词 · 位置中文例句
such as + 引号比如She uses statistics, such as 'over 40% divorce rate in China' to prove that…
like + 引号像He also uses statistics like 'recruitment demand… dropped by 1.5%'
For example, …
eg + 引号
例如For example, he uses parallelism, eg 'not have the help of siblings, not have the support of the society…'
through + 技巧通过He highlights the benefits of language learning through listing, '…'
Xiaoqi further persuades him through statistics '…'
别把两个 like 搞混。作者自己拿 like 当举例词很少见。'A language is like a key…' 和 'you lying flat is like a snail…',那两个 like 在引号里面,是明喻和类比原文的字,不是作者的连词。

④ 说原因和目的

连词 · 位置中文例句
because + 完整从句因为Professor Wang is interviewed because he published an article about lifelong learning and it is a hot topic.
as + 完整从句由于…as they do not have any siblings to share the responsibility
…as the 'double reduction' policy has reduced homework
in order to + 动词为了…in order to prompt Yunfeng to rethink
…in order to convince him not to lie flat
to + 动词为了(最短的一种)…to emphasise her financial independence
目的用 to 就够了,in order to 是想把语气加重时才换。一段里连着四五个 in order to 会很重。

⑤ 转折和对比

连词 · 位置中文例句
but但是Firstly, Chinese culture used to value sons over daughters, but that's no longer the case.
However, …然而However, even with the introduction of the second-child policy in China, many families still choose to have just one child.
rather than + 名词/动词ing而不是…travelling is a more authentic way to experience the world rather than learning a language
instead of + 动词ing而不是…her decision to be single instead of rushing into a marriage is the right thing to do
despite + 名词尽管…who have been working hard for a better life despite a lack of opportunities for further study
in favour of + 名词转而选择…people under economic pressure abandon high-priced goods in favour of low-cost practical items
Others …另一些人Others focus on more practical and economic ways of consumption, as they pursue a simple life.
下面这些别用 Furthermore · Therefore · Thus · Consequently · Nevertheless · In conclusion · Overall · On the other hand · Similarly · Whereas · Meanwhile
这些过渡词没错,只是 Q1(c) 只写一段,用不上这么重的过渡词。写着写着开始摆这些词,通常是内容不够、拿架子撑场面。想不起来用哪个的时候,回到 also 加一个排序词。

五、句架 直接套

下面六句是现成的骨架,把引号里的内容换成你听到的即可。

  1. He uses the famous quotation '…' and the idiom '…' to validate his claim that …
  2. He poses a rhetorical question, '…' to emphasise his view.
  3. Moreover, she uses the analogy '…' to further stress her point.
  4. He also uses statistics like '…' to validate his predictions of …
  5. He highlights … through listing, '…'.
  6. She uses statistics, such as '…', to prove that …

每句都是完整的 T + E + E:点技巧、带引例、说效果。用第四节的连词把三到四句这样的骨架串起来,Q1(c) 的主体就成型了。这个顺序也就是常说的 technique + example + effect,最后回扣题目问的那件事。

交卷前最后一道自查 每写一个技巧,回头确认四件事:英文名拼对了、冠词和单复数对了(a metaphor / statistics / parallelism)、后面接的动词搭配在第三节表里出现过、句子和句子之间有第四节的连词。四项全对,技巧分才算拿到手。

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